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(Btw this contains some references to self-harm so if that bothers you then skip past it.)
Prologue
Marzia Firenze thought about how she was 16 and going to graduate next year as she sat down on her roof, which she had snuck out onto, and watched the
stars. She was naming the constellations in her head. She heard her older brother, Desmond Firenze, call out her name. She pulled on her jacket to hide her recent self harm scars on her exposed body parts like her arms and thighs for instance. Marzia climbed down her window and onto the couch she had placed in front of her window. Desmond watched as she climbed down and smiled. “Hey, so how many constellations did you find today?” he asked. “I lost track..” she sighed. Desmond looked at her worriedly. “Okay then...well I made some food for you. Come down stairs and also mom’s gonna be late today.” he informed her. “Isn’t she always….” Marzia said in disappointment. “Well, she can’t help that dad died and now she has to work harder to be able to support us.” he sighed out. Marzia nodded. “I know it’s just I wish she could spend some time with us once in a while.” her brother nodded in agreement with her and patted her arm as he walked out. She took her jacket off after he left and looked at the scars that just kept piling onto her body every single time she looked at it. She sighed as she put her jacket back on and walked down the stairs.
(So, this is one of my original stories that I’m writing and I want to know if it’s pretty decent or not. Btw I’m open to constructive criticism if there’s anything I could fix.)
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