I'm Looking At My Revision Of Chapter 1, And I Feel Like I Should Post It. I'm A Bit Nervous Since I

I'm looking at my revision of chapter 1, and I feel like I should post it. I'm a bit nervous since I did get hate for a long time regarding my work, but hopefully that anxiety will go away.

I'm more of a one-shot writer, so maybe that's why I'm shaking a bit. I'll be sure to cross post it onto tumblr when I stop shaking.

Made this as a joke when bestie commented her writing fairy must have visited me to get me to pump out 3K words tonight.

Hello and welcome to me talking about B.A.P.

I wanna talk about these boys because they're doing a reunion tour with the group being called BANG&YOO&JUNG&MOON and I have a lot of feelings about them. Good feelings... except for one member, but we'll get there when we get there.

^This man has altered my brain chemistry for the goddamn worst and I would let him break me. The things I have said about him would scare God.

I have a playlist of this group, all the songs I could find on Spotify. Today, I just want to give you guys a list of songs that should have been music videos.

Coma

SPY

Lovesick

Just For Today

Be Happy

Blind

Carnival

Albatross

My Girl

Do What I Feel

All The Way Up

Howler

It is important to me that my opinions are heard about these songs. After a depressive episode lasting days, I went to these boys for comfort (only through song, I don't interact real person fanfiction).

The songs bolded are the ones that I think would have done amazing as music videos, especially since in the early days of their career, they were able to convey different concepts with different videos.

Coma would have been a depressing, yet overdramatic music video about the members dying in a coma as the dark tunnel that they're in caves into darkness. Their girlfriend could have been played by a random member of a girl group, as long as she's able to act sad and sing the one line for her character.

Just For Today is a nice and adorable song. I would have killed to see Zelo front and center for the camera and ask "뽀뽀하고 싶어". Would have been adorable.

Carnival. This whole damn mini album is so fun. While I like Feel So Good, Carnival and another song would have been the best music videos. Just to showcase how fun and silly the boys can be.

Albatross is the best song to ever exist in the history of their discography as a group and nothing else has topped it. I would have killed for a music video.

Do What I Feel is better than That's My Jam and I am staying on this hill. This song should have been the title track.

So VLD introduces Shiro's arm as some sort of weapon. We barely get any insight on it. We are shown in the first episode that it "activates" and it's painful for him to experience. He then just attacks the Galra robots with no hesitation?

What?

Why?

How?

I know Shiro was meant to die, but why bother showing me that and not giving me proper answers?

"Hey Lizzie, how many times have you watched the first episode of VLD?"

Enough to actually visualize the scenes when I'm in another tab.

I do, indeed, need another hobby.

The story formatting for FF.net is still incredibly tedious. Thank you Ao3 for being so kind.