I Doodled This Last Year And Forgot About It Lmao

I doodled this last year and forgot about it lmao

Structuring Your Fight Scene

adapted from <Writer's Craft> by Rayne Hall

Suspense

Show your characters gearing up, readying themselves.

The pace is slow, the suspense is high (use suspense techniques)

Provide information about terrain, numbers, equipment, weapons, weather.

May have dialogue as the opponents taunt each other, hurl accusations, or make one final effort to avoid the slaughter.

Don't start too early - we don't need to see the hero getting out of bed, taking a shower and having tea.

2. Start

Fighters get into fight stance: knees slightly bent, one leg forward, abdominal muscles tensing, body turned diagonally, weapons at the ready.

Each side will usually try to be the first to strike, as this will give them advantage.

The movements in this section need to be specific and technically correct.

3. Action

This section may be quick or prolonged. If prolonged, no blow-by-blow descriptions are needed.

Focus on the overall direction of the fight

Make use of the location to make characters jump, leap, duck, hide, fall, etc.

Mention sounds of weapons

4. Surprise

Something unexpected happens: building catches fire, a downpour, relief force arrives, staircase collapses, bullet smashes into the only lightbulb and everything goes dark, hero losses his weapon, etc.

Add excitement, raise the stakes.

5. Climax

Both sides are tired and wounded

The hero is close to giving up, but is revived with passion

Move to the terrain's most dangerous spot: narrow swining rope-bridge, a roof-edge, sinking ship, etc.

Don't rush the climax! Hold the tension

6. Aftermath

The fight is over: bes buddies lying dead, bandaging, reverberating pain, etc.

Use sense of sight and smell

The hero may experience nausea, shaking, tearfulness or get sexually horny

Fight scene length

Historical/adventure/fantasy: 700-1000w

Romance: 400-700w

Ok so I really loved this kny fic called The Blessing of Kamado-gami by @teaandpainttalk​ and I drew an extended comic of the beginning (prologue?)

Yeah I really liked it for the way its written and how the events unfold, also it did both Kyojuro and Akaza JUSTICE. (it’s not done yet tho so I have no idea how it’ll go lol)

The comic ended up being a lot longer than I expected tho so its under a read more. Also if you’re an anime-only watcher of kny don’t read bc spoilers.

Weiterlesen

im so deep in the renkaza sauce that when nakime's upper moon 4 eyes showed up, i was like "wait why isnt she third" and then i remembered akaza has not in fact defected to help his flame hashira boyfriend defeat muzan after all

Shinazugawa Brothers - I Even Ate Demons

Obanai's little angry face has my heart XD

He's so freaking adorable