Not Gonna Lie, When Laura And Max Sarcrastically Asked Travis About The 7 Reasons Theycant Be Buds And

Not gonna lie, when Laura and Max sarcrastically asked Travis about the 7 reasons they “can’t be buds” and he legit said “you keep calling me names”, I laughed … but then you get to that scene with his ma calling him useless trash and I immediately regretted having that laugh.

Eddie : "We could have been beautiful"

Me :

Me: Yes I watch the walking dead for the plot :)

The plot:

Normal people waking someone up: *call the person's name*

Travis: Lemme touch your face softly...

My type is miserable old men. Poor little meows meows if you will. I'm a connosiir, a collector. Each day I aquire a new miserable old man and I sexualize him

Writing Tips

Descriptions in Between Dialogue

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⤠ how characters interact with the environment

⇝ moving something, picking something up, looking somewhere

⤠ how the environment interacts with the characters

⇝ weather, other character’s actions or movements

⤠ gestures

⇝ facial expressions, body language

⤠ shifts in position

⇝ standing, sitting, leaning, shifting weight, crossing arms/legs

⤠ physical reactions

⇝ body temperature, fidgeting, heart rate, character quirks

⤠ environmental descriptions

⇝ descriptions using the five senses, setting, character’s appearances

⤠ internal dialogue

⇝ emotional reaction to what was said, reflection of past experiences, connections to other characters/settings/actions

➵ I want to reiterate… descriptions using the five senses ; when in doubt, think of the five senses your character is experiencing and pick what best moves the story forward