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"Prasing the light is to be a fool praising a liar"
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The true struggle of a writer...especially one who writes as a hobby.
Writing Description Notes: Mental Pain
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The hallucinations were the same as being tortured for real, all of the emotions, all of the trauma, and none of the empathy that would come with such a real life ordeal.
There was something in that shout, a pain behind it. John watched. He watched Jane’s eyes. Then he knew. The anger was nothing but a shield for pain, like a cornered soldier randomly throwing out grenades, scared for his life, lonely, desperate. He breathed in real slowly. What if nothing blew up? What if there were no consequences? Wouldn't John have to calm down? Wouldn't the shield clatter to the ground and let the pain tumble out?
John sees Jane. He does. He sees pain in her eyes. It has sat there for her lifetime, trapped in the confusion we all carry. He sees love too, the love she would have given were it not for the scars. It's still there, and one day he will set her free. John is not perfect, yet he loves her, and he knows what love means. He asks for a chance to find his feet, to stop his own head from spinning, and he will prove it. There is so much of her life that is a hell for her soul, and she stays there from strength rather than weakness, he knows. So he wants to join her in that pain, walk with her, feel the same torture he knows she bears. And one day, he will find just the right way to bring her home, his love.
Jane's emotional pain seeps out in her words, and it hurts John to hear them, hurts to read them. He senses what is inside that troubles her, yet also there is so much goodness there too—bravery, tenacity. She holds on like a fighter, every morning rising at the ringing of "the bell." All he can offer her is a brighter horizon, a hope that one day she will be free of all this. One day there will be choice, freedom, and security of food, shelter on a healthy Earth.
Emotional pain leaves invisible scars, yet they can be traced by the most gentle of touch.
Nobody wants to hurt, yet if John's pains can be used to help others, he feels blessed. Anyhow, perhaps his scars are his road-map; maybe he would be lost without them.
He turned towards him, a pained expression plastered across his face, teeth clenched as he tried to steady his breathing.
Gripping the ground as hard as he could to take some of the pain away.
It was as if a thousand needles of doubt and self-loathing were piercing her heart with each passing moment, leaving behind a tapestry of scars that only she could see.
It was as though a veil of sadness had been draped over her eyes, distorting her perception of the world and casting everything in shades of gray.
The weight of sorrow was a constant companion, pressing down on his shoulders until he felt he might collapse under its burden.
Her mind was a battlefield, each thought a landmine ready to explode with memories she wished she could forget.
The storm inside his head raged on, a relentless barrage of thoughts and fears that left him feeling exhausted and defeated.
It was as if a dark cloud had settled over his soul.
Her chest felt hollow, a yawning emptiness where joy and peace once resided, now replaced by a gnawing ache.
His mind was a prison denying him the freedom to live fully.
She felt like she was drowning in an ocean of despair, every attempt to surface met with another wave of hopelessness.
Every laugh felt hollow, every smile forced, as if she were playing a role in a play she didn't want to be in.
She felt like a ghost, wandering through life unnoticed, her pain invisible to everyone but herself.
The nights were the worst, when the darkness outside matched the darkness within, and sleep was a distant dream.
It was like a fire burning within, consuming all that was good and leaving behind nothing but ashes of what used to be.
The pain was a silent scream, a cry for help that no one could hear.
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Never forgotten but...never finished.
I have a silly headcanon that when the collector is upset he will hide in one of the archivists capes and refuse to come out.
I see that so clearly. He would absolutely go and hide in the journalists' clothing if he's upset.
He's mostly the closest with the journalist because he practically raised him after the split.
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How to write emotions
How to write emotional scenes
How to show emotions Part I
How to show emotions Part II
How to show emotions Part III
How to show emotions Part IV
How to show emotions Part V
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how do you write a liar?
How to Write Liars Believably
Language
The motive of every goal is the make the lie seem plausible while taking blame off the speaker, so liars will often project what they say to a third party: "Katie said that..."
Referring to third parties as "they" rather than he or she
In the case of a deliberate lie prepped beforehand, there will be an overuse of specific names (rather than pronouns) as the speaker tries to get the details right.
Overuse of non-committal words like "something may have happened"
Masking or obscuring facts like "to the best of my knowledge" and “it is extremely unlikely," etc.
Avoiding answers to specific, pressing questions
Voice
There's isn't a set tone/speed/style of speaking, but your character's speech patten will differ from his normal one.
People tend to speak faster when they're nervous and are not used to lying.
Body Language
Covering their mouth
Constantly touching their nose
fidgeting, squirming or breaking eye contact
turning away, blinking faster, or clutching a comfort object like a cushion as they speak
nostril flaring, rapid shallow breathing or slow deep breaths, lip biting, contracting, sitting on your hands, or drumming your fingers.
Highly-trained liars have mastered the art of compensation by freezing their bodies and looking at you straight in the eye.
Trained liars can also be experts in the art of looking relaxed. They sit back, put their feet up on the table and hands behind their head.
For deliberate lies, the character may even carefully control his body language, as though his is actually putting on a show
The Four Types of Liars
Deceitful: those who lie to others about facts
2. Delusional: those who lie to themselves about facts
3. Duplicitious: those who lie to others about their values
Lying about values can be even more corrosive to relationships than lying about facts.
4. Demoralized: those who lie to themselves about their values
Additional Notes
Genuine smiles or laughs are hard to fake
Exaggerations of words (that would normally not be emphasized) or exaggerated body language
Many savvy detectives ask suspects to tell the story in reverse or non-linear fashion to expose a lie. They often ask unexpected, or seemingly irrelevant questions to throw suspects off track.
Different Genres, Different Fight Scenes.
Romance
No real gore; write entertaining fight scenes with an illusion of reality
Avoid excessive arobatics or feats of unbelievable strength. Stay realistic - describe the weather, how the ground feels.
Add a layer of erotic tension.
Use injuries as opportunities to test the hero and heroine's relationship, for displaying touching and tender care.
Fight scenes in romance tend to be short (<700w)
Where there are several fight scenes: (1) he comes to her rescue - (2) she comes to his rescue (3) together they fight in the final showdown.
Fantasy
Fantasy fight scenes will primarily be enertaining, but have considerable grit.
Since readers needs to retain their suspense of disbelief in dragons, fairies, unicorns, etc. it helps to keep fights realistic.
Heroes will be skilled in using the weapon of their choice, and he climax of the fight will be prolonged, detailed and technically precise.
Science Fiction
Invent a special weapon for your book. To make it plausible, take a real-life weapon and extrapolate.
To make it interesting, the weapon will have a critical flaw or have consequences to the user which will make the plot more interesting.
Thriller
Fight scene in thrillera are very gritty, with real violence and gore. There will be several injuries and death.
However, the hero will also show off his skill in prolonged fight scenes, making it entertaining.
The suspense section is typically long
The hero will often have advanced level fighting skills.
Horror
As long as the blood is plot relevant, readers will want to see gore and grit.
The suspense and aftermath sections will be long, with unexpected twists that gets the hero behind his back.
Cozy Mystery
Cozy mystery won't have too much fighting involved, but if it does it will be be short.
Focus on how the hero struggles towards the next clue as a result of the fight rather than on the fight itself.
Historical
Fight in historical novels can be anything between entertaining and gritty.
Consider the periodic background, tech level, and relative wealth of your fighters before you give them weapons and armour.
In period where life expectancy was shorter and violence was more commonplace, your heros will be less bothered about seeing death, gory gutting, or having children in battle. Less qualms about killing.
In most periods and societies women didn't fight, and you must come up with a plausible backstory for her.
Literary
Either the fight takes place off stage or it is shown in all its realistic brutality.
Literary fight scenes are gritty and short.
You will choose to focus on the aftermath - play up the tragic, sinful, meaninglessness, etc. of violence for the reader and how it affects your hero's psyche.
Young Adult
YA fight scenes are entertaining, but it can escalate to be very scary.
he plot often revolves around he protagnoist performing implausible feats of fighting, often with exceptional martial arts skills.
Choose whatever martial arts teenagers find "cool" and build up your knowledge about it.
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