Heyoo!! How Are You?! I Noticed This.

Heyoo!! How are you?! I noticed this.

Jezebel tilted her head. "Miss Oleander, why are you here?" Jezebel's eyes darted toward you and back at the door.

My MC is male.

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Also, although I LOOOOOVVEEE this, AGAIN LOVE LOVE LOVE LMAO- what does throw me off is the inconsistency with MCs personality. Idk how to explain it, but like we obviously have control over the personality based on the stats, but it felt like my MC was going in and out of the personality I have so far. He's stoic but sometimes felt friendly. Rash but felt naturally cautious. and so forth.

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Lastly...hear this and hear this good. I haven't checked who all the ROs are but I LOVE OWEN!!! Him and my MC give the same exact energy. I can just all the easyness being sucked out of the room when they walk in with their aloof, snarky, grumpy nature.

Thank you so much for the feedback! I have fixed the coding for the next update! I am so excited that you enjoyed Owen; he has to be one of my favourite characters to write, as well as Luis. To answer your question about personalities, this is something I see as well, and I am still brainstorming how to go along with it.

The personality issue is serious due to the fact that, as of right now, there are not a lot of points you can earn. For example, you can have a 51% on stoic, but you are nice to Aunt Zinnia, and suddenly you have a friendly personality, which I am experimenting with for the next update, where you can be friendly with family but still be stoic with everyone else if that makes sense. But I think the more points you earn in later chapters will give your character a more defined personality instead of flip-flopping, if that makes sense. 

Spoilers! 🤐😬 But your MC can choose to be afflicted not just by her mother's parenting but also at Aunt Zinnia's.

Also one more thing, instead of just moving on, the screen repeats itself when talking with Mr. A. Which breaks immersion a tad bit.

The part where Margaret walks in happens 3 times. Maybe instead of repeating the text each time, it'll be better to just show the unchosen option or the next button. It's up to you though in the end. 😊

Thank you for the feedback! I will put that in my notes and work around with some coding for the next update!

Hazel - One Bed

Join us this month on Patreon with stories themed as one bed. Share a bed with your favorite RO in a situation that you normally would not be in with them. Discover some new traits. Have some soft moments. And enjoy the little tidbits they reveal about themselves.

Today is Hazel Albright. Join her in bed after a fight in a cavern. Join at the Courtesan tier to read this story.

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New Chapter Released!

Hello, everyone! 💗

Chapter 3 brings you approximately 55k words in total.

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So, in this update:

You are now an adult, you survived everything life has thrown your way so far. Twenty years old now... so much time has passed since that unforgettable night.

Did you burn the previous Consort's room? Did you not burn the room? How have your decisions shaped the present in front of you?

Two years ago, Helios and Hunter embarked on a journey to Vesphire, while you were confined to your palace. In a matter of hours, they will be back. However, they won't be the only ones returning; the Imperial Army, dispatched two years prior to assist Norazaan in their war, will also be arriving with the royals of that land to express their gratitude.

A hunt has been organized to greet the guests from Norazaan upon their arrival. Whether you choose to participate or not, life will continue as usual. I trust you're ready for whatever may accompany the event.

A few additional changes have been made so...

You will have to restart from the beginning due to rewritten content and stats.

Thank you all for your patience and support, I hope you enjoy this new chapter. 💗

For those that are unfamiliar with the game :

Crown of Ashes and Flames is a fantasy interactive fiction game, free to play from start to finish, on pc and mobile. You play as the only remaining member of the royal family of Vesphire; living in the home of the man who took away everything from you.

The game is safe for those 17 and older and there are many content warnings. Make sure to read them before playing it.

Like the premise so far? Check out the pinned post and give it a try!

If you enjoyed the game, please reblog! One of the things that makes me happy is seeing others enjoy what I have created. Let me know your thoughts and rate the game as well. 💗

Hi love your demo but I want to know when the MC will awake their powers and I want to know the moment when our powers awaken can it be a badass moment to like and that guy who hurt us hurt our baby again and goes complete savage mode

Thank you so much for the support! I don't want to give too much away, but if your MC awakens their power, it will totally be a badass moment, especially since this power is part of the MC in a big way, so I feel like it will also be an emotional moment.