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This interactive fiction novel is intended for mature audiences, reader discretion is advised. TW: blood, death, sexually explicit content, drugs, weapons, torture, extortion, abuse.
"They got it wrong you see, it's not like in the movies. To be born into this kind of life you have to be able to look someone in the eye and shoot without hesitating."
"Can you do that, Luce?"
On New Year's Eve 1974, your life changes forever.
Dante Greco: the heir of your father's "friend's" rival family. 25 years old. Ruthless, trigger-happy, obsessive and brutal. RO.
Carmen Greco: the eldest daughter of the rival family who should've been heir. 26 years old. Charming, frivolous, envious and merciless. RO.
Lazlo Fisher: your father's official heir. Not your brother, almost viewed your father as his, but he never thought of you as family. 21 years old. Kind, strong, tormented and distant. RO.
Charlotte "Charley" Das: assigned to you to be your bodyguard three years ago. 28 years old. Precise, fair, loyal and protective. RO.
Samuel/Samantha "Sam" Flight: your fiancé/e.
"Luce": that's you. 22 years old, almost 23. Normal.
Note: all ROs are red flags (as in some are very, very, bad. Romance at your own risk.)
Also if you could reblog that would help a lot :)
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DEMO: 𝕾𝖊𝖕 2024
Wealth. Power. Death.
The Ballad of the Young Gods is a dark academia interactive fiction story, with dark fantasy and psychological thriller themes. Some of the romances also contain tropes and storylines which may be disturbing to some readers.
It is rated 18+ for depictions of swearing, sexual themes, gore, violence, and death.
Getting into an Ivy League school is a dream that thousands of American students nurse from a young age. Luckily for you, that dream is your reality. Four years of continuous hard work and pressure have made you a proud freshman at Yale University. And as if that wasn’t enough, you have been handpicked to attend Rathore College, whose selection process is revered across all the nation’s top educational institutions. But you should’ve known this stroke of luck came with a catch.
Yale is a crucible of power, where secret societies wield arcane magic and the dead are far from silent. The illustrious House of Styx wants you and this is a situation that not even your money can get you out of.
They are powerful, elite, and most of all, controlling beyond recognition. They are also the heart of the eight secret societies that attach themselves to Yale. From the White House to Hollywood’s most acclaimed stars, their influence reaches farther than anyone can dare to imagine.
A sinister conspiracy brews under Styx’s watchful gaze, one that threatens to unravel the fragile balance between the living and the dead. But in a graveyard of secrets, you and your accomplices are the ones with the shovels. You’re now in a world where the past is never truly dead, and the lines between life and death blur with each passing day.
But some secrets are better left buried, and some prophecies are destined to drag you to hell.
Cédric Armand Lacroix / Céline Armelle Lacroix (M/F)
Vindictive. Conniving. Ruthless.
As the heir to the Lacroix fortune, C is every bit as arrogant as their bloodline demands them to be. Even after the messy divorce of their parents which further led to their disownment by their father, Alain Lacroix, they refuse to give up on their dignity. They’ve vowed to destroy him one day and take what’s rightful theirs, brick by brick. The world bent to C’s whims, what money couldn't buy them, those pale green eyes probably did.
There is nothing that they can’t have, especially if they set their mind to that. That is until you came along and stayed one step ahead of them every time in everything that mattered. It wasn’t just the fortune or the legacy at stake; it was the bruising of their pride, the constant reminder that someone—anyone—could outmaneuver them. But beneath the layers of resentment and anger, there’s something more—something darker, even more dangerous.
An obsession takes root, one that blurs the line between hatred and fascination. And they vow to spend their whole life despising you for everything.
Romance trope: Enemies / Academic Rivals to Lovers.
Vance Kasper Næsholm / Vanessa Karina Næsholm (M/F)
Pious. Haunted. Disillusioned.
Raised under the oppressive influence of a rigid, fire-and-brimstone faith in a Danish Catholic orphanage, they were taught to see demons in every shadow and sin in every touch. Forever haunted by the visions provided by a wrathful God they can neither fully grasp their mind around nor escape from, their only reprieve came on the day they got adopted at the age of six and diagnosed with schizophrenia. But the truth of their ‘psychosis’ may be far more sinister than any medical diagnosis could account for.
As the tides become even stormier and their medications become ineffective when they arrive at Yale, all V can do is hold on to the last threads of control over their lives. Your first meeting almost makes them teeter over the edge.
Now that they’re your roommate, they’re bound to you by fate or folly, but whether they’ll be a stable ally remains to be seen.
Romance trope: Roommate Romance.
Wilhelm Johann Ostendorf / Wilhelmine Johanna Ostendorf (M/F)
Exhausted. Abandoned. Lost.
What does the world think of you when you’re a product of brilliance and neglect at the same time? With an Oscar-winning filmmaker for a father and a mother ensconced on the American board of directors at the Louvre, their pedigree is undeniable, yet it is a legacy more hollow than it appears. While their parents sculpted their careers into masterpieces and amassed accolades, they left W to be raised by their paternal aunt and uncle. A sizeable trust fund and periodic checks served as their parents’ only gestures of care, a shallow substitute for the love and attention their only child so desperately craved.
The only times they had felt more than someone who was deeply unlovable were the summers you spent on rusty swingsets and fast bicycles with training wheels. But the swingsets have long been dismantled, and the bicycles have been traded for cars.
The only questions remain—are you the same kid who saw them, really saw them, beyond the reality of being unwanted and the suffocating looks filled with pity that came with their name? Or will this reunion only serve to confirm their deepest fear—that they are, and always have been, truly alone?
Romance trope: Forgotten Childhood Friends to Lovers.
Dumitru Constantin Diaconu / Dumitra Constantina Diaconu (M/F)
Charismatic. Reckless. Guarded.
D’s name is the one that comes up in almost every conversation about Yale’s wildest parties. A natural-born rockstar charmer with a magnetic presence, they effortlessly draw people into their orbit, collecting hearts and bodies with the ease of someone who’s always been in the center of the gold rush. Despite the countless admirers and the trail of broken hearts left in their wake, you’ll always find them with a Marlboro between their lips and a new person in their arms to warm their bed at night. Their smile is a promise, and their laughter a siren call. In the haze of flashing lights and the thrum of bass that pulses through the walls, they are a heartbreaker in every sense of the word.
Feelings are a complication they don’t allow, a line they never cross. They’ve perfected the art of detachment, of keeping their connections strictly no-strings, because to let someone in would be to risk the vulnerability they’ve long since sworn off.
Will you be the only person they'd let peel back the barbed wire surrounding their heart? Or will you be left with nothing but the faint scent of cinnamon and a tale that wasn't meant to be?
Romance trope: Friends with Benefits / Sex First, Feelings Later. [You will only be able to unlock their romance route through a hookup.]
Maxwell Edmund Whitlock-Singh / Maxine Edythe Whitlock-Singh (M/F)
Duty-bound. Noble. Untouchable.
Politeness and decorum are second nature to M. They are the embodiment of manners, a living testament to the art of subtlety in a world where spectacle often trumps substance. They are the sort of person who commands attention without seeking it, a product of both royal blood and rigorous self-discipline. Dubbed the “Paragon of Styx,” M is a modern Plato, someone who finds as much solace in philosophical debates as in the classical texts they’ve devoured in multiple languages. As the second-born child of the Crown Princess of Wales, they have always understood that their life would be one of service with every action scrutinized, and every word weighed.
Their intellect is vast, but it is their passion for the esoteric that sets them apart. For all their convictions, there is a restlessness within M that even they cannot fully articulate. It is the paradox of their existence—a life of privilege that feels at times like a gilded cage, a role that demands both reverence and obedience. Indeed, heavy is the head that wears the crown.
Will you make them realize that life is more than duties and expectations? Or will you become yet another figure in the background, another reminder of the golden cage they were born into?
Romance trope: Forbidden Royal Romance / Secret Relationship.
Step into the shadows as the wealthy heir apparent to a billion-dollar industry who is just starting at Yale University as a freshman.
Be a part of Yale’s most enigmatic secret society, the House of Styx.
Fully customize your character including: pronouns, gender, physical appearance, personality, sexuality, and more.
Romance 1 out of 5 love interests (all of them are gender-selectable). Or not. Platonic relationships are valid too.
Study forbidden knowledge, practice dark magic, and try not to fail at your actual coursework.
Test your mind, body, and soul in rituals that blur the line between reality and nightmare.
Learn about the secrets that your mother took to her grave. Is she really the same woman you remember so fondly from your childhood?
Will you rise to navigate the sinister plans brewing under the nose of the House? Or will your actions drag you and your companions to the fiery depths of Hell.
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DEMO (Sep ‘24)
SPOTIFY (for RO playlists, click on their names in the cast section)
WRITTEN BY: axel (he/him)
CODED BY: @albywritesfiction (they/them)
4/5/2023
Chapter 1 UPDATE!!!
I am finally done with chapter one; it took longer than planned due to the fact that college exams are coming up and I need to study. However, I am back in the game and ready to write! I have a lot planned for the next few chapters, and I plan to publish the demo when I get to chapter 3. I want to leave you guys with something to enjoy until I am able to write Chapter 4, because that is when the fun begins (heheh). I know that I don't have many fans, but I love writing, and this plot has been in my mind forever!
Chapter One:
- roughly 21817 words
- Introduce your character
- run a delivery to the doctor
- meet your longtime neighbors
- Meet Mr. Anderson's granddaughter
I'm literally still on Chapter 2 of Book 1 but I have the idea for Book Two of My Inner Sins plot. Who doesn't like a vampire motorcycle 🧛♀️ 🏍 gang? Anyone? I am actually putting that in the idea pot and letting it cook. 😄
6/13/2023
CHAPTER TWO UPDATE!
I am officially done with chapter two! Between family issues and my wisdom teeth getting yanked out of me, I thought I would never be able to get chapter two finished, but it is! Half of why it is so late is on me, due to the fact that I wanted it to be just enough lore explaining of this world that I created, which is hard when all I want to do is scream it from the roof tops like Rafiki introducing Simba for the first time, but I think I got the perfect mixture down to let you guys know enough while still having a hint of mystery.
Chapter Two:
roughly 24,332 words
Introduce another RO in the weirdest way possible.
Join the "book club" on an important discovery about you.
Meet a bunch of more characters that live in Lockwood.
Be able to stand up for your aunt.
Watch your familiar battle it out with a giant snake.
A deeper look into your family
Meet the princes and princesses of hell.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MARCEL!~Short Story
MARCELLUS'S BACKSTORY SPOILERS BELOW!!!
The sun glistened on the Sarno River, where ships floated aimlessly while others were anchored at port. People were all about enjoying the sunny morning, not even minding sailors ordering their men to get the nets drawn so they could get to work selling their fresh scores of fish down at the market.
Further north, crisp hills rolled from a large mountain to the crowded city to the west. The streets were bustling as people shopped, visited relatives, and even children drew on the walls of a big arch with speckles of paint that their guardians let them buy when the merchants came into town only a few days ago.
Although people were walking down one street in the center of the city, heads turned as shouts bounced off the stone walls covered in floral motifs.
"Thief!"
"Stop him, you fools!"
A man, or more accurately, a teen dressed in a cloak, ran down the busy street, bumping into people as he ran from city guards.
"Sorry!" The teen said this as he jumped through a fountain, splashing water on an older woman who was resting.
“Es stercus!” A man yelled, helping the woman up.
"I said sorry!" The teen yelled over his shoulder; his feet burned from the hot cobblestone marked by the sun.
Need to lose the old dogs.
Looking to his right, he smiled like a lemer and ran towards the narrow alleyway, knowing full well that the guards would not be able to follow him with the bulk of armor they torture themselves with.
Marcel held his breath as the guards ran past the alleyway, not noticing the hunched figure of the sixteen-year-old boy.
Letting out a chuckle, he held the bag full of his precious cargo closer to his body, making sure none of it was smashed.
Looking up at the sun, he knew he should be getting back and quickly climbed the wall of the building next to him with the help of a few boxes and overgrown vines.
Balancing on the roof, he leapt from house to house, gracefully and practically dancing in the warm sun.
It only took a few minutes, and knowing the city like the back of his hand made it easier to navigate even while he was on rooftops.
Finally arriving at his destination, he easily jumped on a balcony and swung to a tree branch hanging by until his feet hit the ground.
"At last....home." Marcel said, looking at the old torn-down villa built with tan bricks and red pine wooden decorations that hung in the front to ward off evil spirits.
The closer he got, the more he could hear the sounds of laughter and crying from children. Through short, wide windows, if he narrowed his eyes and focused, he could see heads of hair run past.
Marcel let out a smirk and opened the front door.
"Mars!" A small girl squealed and threw herself into his arms, which spined her around.
"Oh, Cassia! It's been forever since I saw you!"
"You saw me this morning, Mars!" Cassia giggled and hung onto the taller boy.
Marcel grinned. "Did I? Well, you've grown since then!"
Cassia blushed and stood on her tiptoes. "You really think so?"
"Well, of course."
"Is that Marcellus?! Oh, I have a word to pick with you."
From down the hallway a young woman appeared with black hair all the way down to the floor in a braid and the most stunning blue eyes that seemed to distract people from her dark bags that were under them.
"Decima! It's good to see you."
"I don't want to hear it, Marcellus." Decima spoke with narrowed eyes, then turned to Cassia.
"Little Shurb, how about you go play outside with the twins?"
Cassia wrinkled her small button nose. "But they always want to play Terni lapilli."
Decima frowned. "What's wrong with Terni lapilli?"
Cassia crossed her arms. "Nothing; they just always lose the marbles, and it takes us till sundown to find them." She pouted.
Marcel got down on his knees and booped her nose. "How about this? You play with your brothers, and I'll get you new marbles tomorrow."
Cassia's eyes widened. "Shiny ones?"
Marcel nodded, the small girl's smile being infectious. "They will be as shiny as Sol's chariot."
Cassia nodded her little head. "Deal!" The small girl ran out of the arched, cracked doorway.
Decima sighed as she rubbed at a stain on her lavender stola.
"Marcellus, what have you done this time?"
Marcel lips pressed together, knowing full well a lecture was coming.
"Please, on Astraeus's stars, do not start pestering me, Decima.
"Oh, shall I not, Marcellus? If the sweat on your forehead and the dirt on your feet are any indication, you have been participating in Mercury's sinful tricks."
"Don't pretend that his sinful tricks do not keep us from drowning."
Decima glared. "They may keep our heads above the tide, but for how much longer? Once the guards catch you, that's it!" She slammed her hand down on the table, and Marcel was surprised her copper wedding band on her finger didn't crack.
Marcel's brows furrowed. "Don't you see I am doing what I must? With Octavian gone—" Decima's eyes closed as if in pain at the mention of the name. "—we are all at risk even with our union. If we don't manage to keep up with our debt, then our ruse would have been for nothing, not to mention what Rufus would do."
Decima looked away, and Marcel took the older girl by the shoulders, making her look him in the eye. "You are my truest friend... I am doing what is right for all of us. For the children. For you as well."
Marcel and Decima stared into each other's eyes for what felt like minutes. They knew everything about the other—what stalked their dreams, what pushed them to keep going—but they never judged, for they completely trusted the other.
Decima nodded at her friend. "May Juno be with you."
Marcel smiled, a little bitterly. "No gods are with me."
Before Decima could utter a sound, Marcel walked down the hall. "Cerdis is in the children's room, I'm guessing."
Decima called back, wiping her hands on the front of her stola. "Yes, you know he has been waiting for you."
Happiness surged through him, suppressing the fear that was slowly creeping into his mind.
Marcel smiled and opened the door to the largest room in the very small, cracked domus where they lay their heads each night.
Candles lit the room where no windows let their light in. Two dark wooden cribs were in the corner, while there was a small bed on the other side of the room, which kept two growing children resting their heads, although there was barely any room for one child, much less two.
Although right then there was only one child, whose hair was raven and nappy, even under the covers, anyone could see the boy was small—too small. Most considered the boy to be cursed by Asclepius and wanted him put out of his misery, although Marcel knew better.
Marcel sat on the bed, making sure not to startle the sleeping figure.
Gently, Marcel uncovered the face of the small boy to reveal sunken eyes and paste-like skin that seemed to be coated with sweat; however, there was a small smile that played on the sleeping boy's lips.
The older boy spoke softly. "Cerdis, it is time to wake; Sol's chariot has already passed."
Eyes slowly opened, blinking before the little boy grinned from ear to ear; his brightness could put a smile on anyone's face.
"Mars!" A raspy voice came from Cerdis as he sat up, wrapping his small arms around the older boy.
Marcel softly kissed the boy on the top of the head. "Ah! Finally, you wake from your slumber." He held the raven-haired boy close. "Are you feeling blessed this morning by the gods?"
Cerdis nodded his head, looking confident. "Yes, because it is my day of birth!"
Marcel smiled. "Yes, it's not everyday that someone survives five winters."
Cerdis frowned. "I am still not as tall as Cassia."
The older boy laughed. "No, but maybe with the help of Juno, you will catch up." He said it, hoping that the bitterness would be kept out of his tone.
Cerdis gave him a toothy grin. "You really think so? I won't only be older than her, but taller as well!"
Ah yes, Cassia does hold her height over Cerdis very often, although it is probably due to the fact that Cerdis was the only one who questioned her when picking games. Hmm. I wonder what Cassia will do when Cerdis comes into manhood. I'm sure Cassia will find something else to hang over the poor boy's head.
Marcel patted Cerdis's head. "Well...I have you a present."
Cerdis shook with excitement and, with almost lightning speed, reached for Marcel's satchel but with speed was snatched back. "Now, now, Cerdis, I have a few other things in here."
Cerdis crinkled his nose, although the comment didn't make his smile waver. "I cannot wait any longer! Please Mars! What have you brought me?"
Without a second thought, Marcel opened the bag, minding the trinkets that were valuable, however small enough that their owners would not even notice they were gone until it was too late.
Cerdis's eyes widened as Marcel pulled something oval-shaped and quite small into his palm and wrapped it in cloth.
The raven-haired boy smelled the sweet aroma, and his mouth watered. "Is that-?"
Marcel uncovered the item to reveal the room-temperature sweet bun, smashed a little on one side, which made the honey sweetness drip over until the cloth was covered with the sticky substance.
"It was no trouble." Marcel once again kissed Cerdis head.
"A maritozzi!" Cerbis, not minding the stick, grabbed the sweet treat with full hands and took a bite. Marcel tried not to cringe at the mess on the boy's face.
But it was quite easy, with the happiness shining through. "Mmm."
"I see you are quite enjoying my present."
Cerdis showed his dimples through his smile, licking his fingers. "Thank you, Mars!"
Marcel smiled in a moment of weakness, asking the gods to bless his little brother with many more winters.
Hi, your IF seems very interesting...but I was wondering how the ROs would react it the MC would out of the blue just grab their hand 🫣🫣🫣
Thank you so much for the kind words! It is really exciting to be sharing this world I created with you!
And as for you ask....well....
💛 Marcel:
Relationship Stage: Crush
When he feels your hand in his, the whole world seems to stop. How could he focus when you were all he wanted to look at? Keeping his blush under control, he squeezes your hand to comfort you. That's what this was, right? Maybe you are scared; it's not like anyone could blame you, especially with what's going on.
Don't worry.... I'm not letting you go through this alone. Not ever.
Relationship Stage: Couple
When your hand slips into his, Marcel gives you a bright smile, his perfect straight teeth blinding you.
Marcel's body feels hot as if Venus struck him, but he doesn't question or fear the feeling; he lets himself drown in it. In slow motion,giving you time to back away, he leans forward and kisses your cheek.
🧡 Margaret:
Relationship Stage: Crush
Margaret doesn't even notice at first; her eyes are too occupied looking from display window to display window, but when she does notice, her body jitters like she drank ten cups of coffee.
You point to a store, talking, but she doesn't hear you; her focus is on your hand entwined with hers. But she doesn't dare say anything; she doesn't want to ruin the moment. Everything is better. Her vision is clearer. The sky is more blue. Are birds chirping? She basically radiates sunshine.
I never want this to end.
Relationship Stage: Couple
Honestly? She would be the one to put her hand in yours; she loves physical affection. So your days will be filled with walking arm in arm (even if it is just in the other room), small kisses, and cuddles. But if you are someone who is not overly affectionate and you place your hand in hers, get ready for a happy dance even if you're out in public.
♥️ Owen:
Relationship Stage: Crush
You gently slide your hand into his as he chows down on his food.
With his fighter instincts, he quickly notices your hand, although... *deep sigh* Owen is the most oblivious when it comes to his feelings or anything really that doesn't deal with fighting.
So he scrunches his eyebrows and squeezes your hand.
"What is it?"
You frown. "What?"
"You're trying to get my attention, right? Where is the threat?" He licks his lips, looking from person to person almost as if imagining their faces under his fist.
You let out a small sigh. "Oh, never mind."
Relationship Stage: Couple
You gently slide your hand into his and like a loyal dog his body perks up. With almost fearful eyes, he looks you over to make sure you're alright, checking boxes in his head. No broken bones. You don't have a headache. Your not tense.
Pulling you closer to him, he looks around the room once. "Everything all right?" He whispers and squeezes your hand, never taking his eyes off you.
When you tell him you just wanted to hold his hand, he nods his head, although with an arrogant smile on his lips, he pulls you closer and gets back to what he was doing.
💙 Rosie:
Relationship Stage: Crush
With a small smile, Rosie puts down the car's sun visor, checking her flawless makeup.
When she feels your hand in hers, she pauses. She knows lust like the back of her hand. The pleasant aching between her legs wasn't the only thing she was feeling, but the pleasant flutter in her pulse was something she hadn't felt since...him.
Swallowing a lump in her throat, she turns to look at you with a sly smile.
"Oh, Sweetheart, you are making me blush."
You look at her confused, and she smiles like a cheshire cat.
"Our hands, love? Are you trying to tell me something?" She says, explaining her comment.
"W-what?"
"Why don't you pull over?" She licks her lips.
Relationship Stage: Couple
Her pulse quickens even now after being together romantically for so long. She smiles to herself before letting go of your hand and pulling you close to her.
She kisses you with as much tenderness as she can muster, not letting you go until you come up for air with swollen lips.
With a content sigh, she rests her forehead on yours and stays there as long as you let her, not wanting to let you go
🩵 Tai:
Relationship Stage: Crush
Usually, Tai could feel when people were near; it came with the territory of being him. Either because people found his behavior odd or because most were perplexed at seeing such a cranky smart individual, their stares always put him on edge. But with you? No. He didn't feel the need to put his mask on all the time. You are like soothing wind, blowing away the stress.
So he doesn't feel you sitting next to him on the couch while he rests his eyes. Nor does he see you give him that memorizing annoying smile. But.. he feels that when you put your hand In his, his eyes bulge open like he is jolted by electricity.
"What the HELL are you doing?" He sits up, snapping his hand away. The force of his anger pushes you back.
All you do is blink and let out a stuttering excuse. "I thought-"
Tai could only pray that you took his red face as anger. "You thought?! Well, let me give you something to THINK about! Did you know that over three thousand germs live on your hands alone?!"
"I mean-"
"I have no idea where you have been! Knowing you, you covered every disease imaginable from your glucose-covered clients."
"Hey!" You say in outrage.
Tai walks away. "So think before you infect others with those things you call hands."
Tai's heart beats faster and faster, only calming down when he locks himself in his office.
What is happening to me?
Relationship Stage: Couple
Your presence instantly soothes him. Tai feels himself relax and lets out a small sigh, even more so when you absently put your hand in his.
For only a short second, he feels himself stiffen, which makes you realize what you have done.
Biting your lip, you let out a small apology before you start to slip out of his grasp.
Tai frowns and grabs your hand, ignoring your confused looks before bringing your hand to his mouth and kissing the tips of your fingers to the palm, until finally he looks at you.
"Don't apologize."
💚 Zane:
Relationship Stage: Crush
Hate. Zane sees you as, for lack of better terms, his nemesis. The child of the mirror throne is the thing his master wants the most. Sure, he can feel attraction for you, but he doesn't actually see it as a crush until he is so deeply in love that all he can do is try not to drown. So if you were to put his hand in his neutral ground...
Zane snaps his hand away. "What....?" He looks at you confused, like you're some sort of puzzle, before scoffing and turning away. "Don't push it, Little Lion."
Relationship Stage: Couple
Much like Margaret, he wouldn't be able to keep his hands off you; however, his is a little less wholesome and a little more PG-13 (as far as your willingness to go to be naughty in public, or if not, he will just have to imagine in his head). So if you just innocently put your hand in his, he is throwing you over his shoulder and taking you to the bedroom.
"Don't look so shocked, Little Lion."
Tai looks so cool! I can't wait for you to post when the demo is coming out 😍 Here is a fun little Question
What Disney character is most like the ROs?
I can't wait either! I am still on Chapter 3 but when that is done it will be posted on Twine. I will make an announcement. But as for your ask...
Here you go!
💛 Marcel
I have to go with Nani from "Leo & Stitch." Like Nani, Marcel is a caretaker, which is a really big part of his character, but he also makes sacrifices for the ones he loves, even if it costs him, just like Nani.
🧡 Margaret
Olaf. Do I need to say more? While Margaret isn't made of snow, she is obsessed with warm hugs that will soften anyone's heart. She is also very naive when it comes to certain things, which I see a lot of in Olaf's character.
❤️ Owen
This one was hard. I kept going back and forth in my head, but I decided that Beast from "Beauty and the Beast" is just that he is very intimidating up close and can get angry when things don't go his way, but under all that bravado is just a lonely soul wanting to be loved.
💙 Rosie
This one was also quite easy. Meg from "Hercules" because both Meg and Rosie are very beautiful, seductive, smart, but also broken young women who just need someone to love them.
🩵 Tai
I have to go with Doc Hudson from "Cars" on this one. Tai and Doc are both super grouchy mature, and both have hidden soft hearts that just want the best for everyone. (I know "Cars" is technically Pixiar, but Disney owns Pixiar, so I am still counting it.)
💚 Zane
For Zane, I have to go with Prince Naveen from "Princess and the Frog." Zane is a flirt and usually thinks about himself, much like the prince. Once he starts to fall in love with you, you will be all he can think about.
My friend sent me this and I just had to post it for Rosie's birthday.
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Hi Florence! Your interactive fiction seems really cool 😎 I have read many other IF and I was wondering who you would pair your own characters with from other interactive fictions in a platonic or romantic sense?
Thank you so much! 😊As for your question, Anon I would rather have platonic relationships with other ROs from other interactive fictions.💗 I don't want anyone to think they need to base their MC off of other characters to be in the "perfect" relationship with the ROs in my story. Please follow these blogs, they are an amazing writers and have amazing IFs.
💛 Marcel
Marcel is known for his loyalty, especially to his friends, which would make for a great relationship with Victor Orlov from @disenchantedif . Victor seems like such a sweetheart. I could see them working out plans together to help their friends and even checking on each other when the other seemed stressed about something. They are both mama bears 🐻 in their friend group.
🧡 Margaret
Playing Summer of Love by @summeroflove-if , I fell in love with Charlie. His sweet personality and his naive nature towards love and romantic 💕 relationships in general remind me a lot of Margaret. I could see them really getting along and talking for hours about their favorite things and hobbies.
💙 Rosie
Due to Rosie's charming personality and love for everything about high class 🍷 , she would really get along with Hamish/Helena from @doriana-gray-games. I can imagine Rosie going to one of his parties and having an amazing time.
♥️ Owen
I think that Owen would really get along with Lady Margaret from @nextinline-if due to the fact that they are both loyal and highly skilled in battle. Plus, they both love knives. 🔪
🩵 Tai
Tai is very introverted and would rather jump off a bridge 🌉 than go to a social event, so he just needs someone to get him out there. The most extroverted person I know is Skylar from @vendetta-if . Their friendship just makes me giggle for hours.
💚 Zane
Zane has had a horrible childhood and needs someone to show him the joys of life, which I can see in Jessie from @emersonfreepress . I can see them having a strong friendship, and Jessie is an animal lover, as is Zane, especially snakes. 🐍
Thank you so much 💓 Your characters are amazing and I can't wait to see more!
Hi! I adore your Interactive fiction! 🤩 Your writing is just amazing. I'm trying to write my own interactive fiction and I just think the world and plot you created is so detailed! I'm in love with every character and I hope you don't mind me asking ♥️ but how would the ROs react to an MC who just looked at the RO in awe when they come into view. Clearly smitten with the RO.
Hi Florence ! Thank you for your kind words.
Arthur 🐴 : He quickly flushed, a shy smile on his lips. "Do I have something on my face?"
"You mean apart from the most beautiful attribute in the world, no nothing." You smile, devouring him with your eyes.
Tally 🐺 : "See anything you like?" She smiles broadly knowing full well that she's the cause of your condition.
You mirror her smile. "Everything, I like absolutely everything." You stammer dreamily.
Lessica 🐍 : She raises an eyebrow. "I'm beginning to think you're spending too much time with me. When I said observation, I didn't know I'd be your guinea pig."
"You're not a guinea pig. You're a work of art." You reply, detailing her from head to toe.
She fight a smile. "Oh, please."
Corden 🦊 : "It's wrong to stare! Stop it." Complains the young Orc, turning away from you.
"But you're so handsome."
"I'm not," he snaps. "Then stop pretending I am."
Sage/Sophia ⏳️: "I'm not going to look away first you know." They laugh softly as you're locked in a staring game.
"Nor me either, you're far too distracting."
Their smiles grow wider. "And I'm afraid you'd disappear if I blinked."
"Never."
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Good luck with your IF ! 😊
I just wanted to give you all a height chart. My friend asked me for one (she is one of my beta readers) because she wanted to see how tall her MC was to her romantic interest, so I made this for her and wanted to share it.
Would tho Ros be okay with an MC who’s ace/ on the ace spectrum?
Hello, darling, Thank you for ask! To answer your question...
Of course! What you will learn about the ROs is that they have lived a very long life, and romantic connection is all they need. However, there are ROs that have certain wants, sexually, and they will be able to solve those themselves through self-pleasure.
NSFW! Who RO is the most packing in terms of manhood for the guys and chest area for the ladies? From greatest to least.
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NSFW 🔞
Woman:
Greatest to Least
Rosemary (C Cup) -》 Margaret (A Cup)
Men:
Greatest to Least
Owen -》 Tai -》 Zane/Marcel (Average)
PART 1 OF CHAPTER 3: DEMO
Hi. Thank you to anyone who takes the time to play My Inner Sins. It is not perfect, not at all, and as of right now, there are no saves,however, I am working on it constantly. I have made this world when I was still a preteen, and years later it finally came to life. I am just so happy. 😊
"Red rubbed his head on your leg, you were going to have a lot of cat hair."
I Chose The cute little hairless cat
Yes, sorry for the mishap with the coding. I actually noticed that right after I posted the demo. Don't worry, it will be fixed in the next update, along with all the other little mistakes. You will get to have your little wrinkly baby rub on your leg without the mention of fur. Lol. Every cat owners dream!
Hi! Love the demo and the characters! <3
Just wanted to ask, do you plan on adding a saving system on your if?
Hello angel! Yes their will be a save system on the next update so don't fret!
Heeey Florence I hope you are having a splendid weekend ♥️ I took note and my nerdy heart laughed at seeing you refer to Tai as a bit of a Tsundere. Omg i love grumpy hard to romance characters.
Call me toxic but I love a bit of jealousy. My MC is a bit of a flirt himself so it got me thinking.
How would the ROs react to someone openly flirting with MC trying to ask them on a date like Literally infront of them during the crushing stage?
Thankkkk you 😇
Oh, we all want a bit of jealousy in our lives. Who doesn't? Now, how would the ROs react to the MC who was being flirted with.....????
CRUSHING STAGE:
💛 Marcel
Oh God, my poor baby. He really wouldn't know what to do, but in the end, he would make the sacrifice of turning around while you talk to someone who seems to have your attention or what it looks like anyway. He would be your shoulder to cry on or just a best friend in general. When looking at you, he doesn't need anything else.
Marcel is mature and would rather not make a fuss, but that doesn't mean he doesn't care. Oh no, he will totally be staying awake the whole night thinking of you, or maybe you will find that he made you a cup of tea the next morning. Just a little something to get you thinking of him.
🧡 Margaret
The first thought that comes to mind is nervousness. She might have a few thoughts, like:
Why did I feel like I wanted to punch that person in the face? That is not very nice.
Margaret would be upset, and she would probably go to one of her friends (Marcel, Rosemary, Owen, or even Tai) for help. When she is told that she is jealous, she will be a bubbling sunshine mess. She has feelings for you, and how could she not? You're awesome! She would burst through the café door and jump into your arms, telling you how she felt.
♥️ Owen
Snarky comments, for sure, towards whoever is flirting with you. Scoffing at their personal interests—basically anything they could make a comment about, they would. Owen is really clueless about love—well, not clueless; he just wouldn't realize that this was a crush; he would just think he felt something off about the person.
If you were to ask him about it, he would just shurg his shoulders and say, "I don't have a good feeling about them, Lass/Duck/Lad." But when he looks into your eyes, Oh Boy, does he feel the heart beating in his chest. It finally hits him like a truck going ninety miles per hour, and he might actually choke when talking to you. With a confused look on your face, he would leave the shop.
Not again. Not again.
💙 Rosemary
Rosie wouldn't think it was a crush as well, but she was just upset that this person was taking her attention away.
Rosemary would gently touch your arm or whisper in your ear, making the person talking to you so uncomfortable. When you were to turn around, Rosemary would give the person a little death glare and pull you towards her, telling you that you looked like you were going to fall.
When the person gets their order and leaves, in no time is Rosemary crossing her legs with class, and just like that, the problem is gone. Now give her the attention she deserves.
🩵 Tai
Denial. Anger. He would keep a stern look on his face as he insulted the person; if you were to ask him about it, his line of fire would land on you. With a few insults, he would leave the shop, tears not forming until he knew he was alone.
However, he would soon realize how much of an ass he was being and apologize to you the next day, but his mask was back up. All you would get is a monotone, cold apology, but an apology nonetheless.
💚 Zane
Zane would be foaming at the mouth. Zane would be glaring at the person so hard that if looks could kill, then that person would be dead on the spot.
When you turn around to get something, Zane looks at the person and whispers.
"Mine"
If the person got the hint and left you alone, then Zane would leave it at that, but if not, oh, then you might see a missing poster in a few weeks. Don't cross Zane.
Hi, if anyone is familiar with SugarCube 2.36 on Twine then please message me. I would love to pick your brain about coding and how to make my story better.
So cute
How would the ro’s feel about a slayer who just wants to lay their head in the ro’s lap and listen to their partner read them a book and ends up falling asleep while being read to?
Hello, dear.
That really gets Amisha excited. Like a true kitten, she is needy and loving. She will be very content and purring all the time.
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Being touched physically and sweetly may make Veleena a little reluctant at first. She will likely act like a statue at first as she tries to figure out what to do, but once she starts to unwind, I can imagine her having a nice, relaxing moment for once.
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Even while he would like to go the other way and curl up on your lap while you read to him and give him grapes (yep, all at once), Khalid is also game for that. It is not feasible, though, for him to serve as the server just once.
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Veldon is down for that, so get ready for tons of head rubs, hair play, and forehead kisses while he pulls off the most outrageously dramatic reading ever to make you laugh.
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Kaellë would be delighted to do it. Enjoying spending time with you all, inquiring about your lives, sharing with you about her sister and family, and getting to read you some interesting science, magic, and healing facts. For her, it was the ideal evening.
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These calming and socializing activities are a strange but pleasant change for Mauthak. Yes, he is willing to do so since he likes the opportunity to finally discover how to express his own emotions. Despite his lack of reading skills and being a little clusmy, he would be more than happy to share stories about his folks and nation with you.
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Secret is a bit too energetic and hyperbolic to sit quietly for you to lie on their lap. I'm sure they would try, but in the end, they would ask you questions about the world they never get to see and drag you along on an exploratory excursion in a flower field or up on a tree to collect the juiciest fruit they can acquire.