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Lips are the bane of my existence, but I figured I should get a little bit of practice drawing people in, before I continue working on dragon submissions. It's probably worth noting that I haven't watched another dsmp thing since I finished my Technoblade portrait, I just think Revivebur looks neat, and the cosplayers I see look amazing.
Critique is always welcome! The image description is under the cut!
[ID: A portrait of Revivebur, from Dream SMP. He is wearing a large trench coat that has a number of stains and scuff marks. His left eye is covered by his white bangs, while the rest of his glasses and his other eye are visible. The visible lens of his glasses is cracked, and a large chunk is missing. His yellow sweater has a dull stain around a sewn tear. The showing eye is black, with a white and blue iris. End ID]


5 months ago vs. 15 minutes ago (:
I still haven’t watched many more DSMP streams, so I’ve never actually seen Revivebur outside of fan art, but I adore c!Wilbur’s character arc and concept. Five months ago I had done a quick portrait of him in an attempt to deal with art block, and did a similar thing a few days ago, finishing the second piece just today (as of writing this). (:
ID and some of the changes I made are under the cut! (: Critique is always welcome, and I hope you have a lovely day/night!
Changes Made:
I used a reference this time and it paid off in the hair and facial construction. The new neck and mouth are still a little weird though.
Wilbur is now facing forward, showing more of the stitches across his face and the patch of skin.
The anatomy is generally a bit better - the shoulders are a bit wider, and the lips are finally decent looking. The eyes are definitely more realistic and fit in better with the rest of the piece.
His clothes are a bit cleaner now, and his jacket is in a bit better shape. The pin however, is a bit more desaturated, to look older.
[ID: Two digital art pieces, portraits of the same character, Revivebur from Dream SMP. The portrait on the left is older, and Revivebur is wearing a tattered jacket with several visible tears and a patch on the lapel. He is facing towards the right, and his eyes sit high up on his face, leaving no room for the forehead. The second, newer portrait is on the right, and is much more realistic, with more desaturated skin tones, and a chip taken out of the glasses. End ID]